From E.MacDonald , on Thu, 07 Aug 1997 05:02:07 GMT
THE WAR IS OVER
Hearing the bangs,
The screams of fear,
I had to keep running,
I shed a tear.
I felt a nip searing,
the back of my leg,
I dropped to the ground,
I thought I was dead.
The pain was still there,
I sighed with relief,
My eyes looked back,
In disbelief.
The thump of heavy boots,
came nearer and nearer,
a gun to my back,
I felt the bearer.
Praying for life,
I was told to stand,
Play dead play dead,
But I raised a hand.
Turning around,
looking face to face,
a young man stood,
feeling out of place.
I knew that a killing,
wouldn't occur,
this boy still had the eyes,
of a youngster.
He was looking down,
to scared to make the move,
his finger clenching the trigger,
right on the groove.
His finger moved slowly,
away from the gun,
a tear to his eye,
he wanted to run.
The facial expression,
I've seen it before,
then I remebered,
I wore it in my first war.
I reached out my hand,
to comfort him with joy,
a shot rang out,
killing this young boy.
I screamed in anger,
the last shot was sound,
the war was over,
I fell to the ground.
I wrote this poem last year, I was 14 and I only used my imagination to think of what it might be like to see a young boy of the opposition being killed. To see the innocence in their face. I am now 15 and I am very interested in the Vietnam War. If you didn't like my poem then I would like to say I am sorry for not portraying the right kind of feeling and emotion that you (if you were there) might have experienced.
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