Emotions felt and not "experienced".

Yes, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.. You demonstrated a remarkable talent. Please continue to express yourself in poetic written form, I strongly encourage you. As a poet you have or are "allowed" literary license. You don't have to have "been there" to know about it. I, myself write about things which I have not fully experienced.... About being "Blind" About being a "Woman" ( I am Male.) Anyway, this is not about me... It's about....YOU! I hope and pray that your parents are very "Proud" of you.... I am.

Sincerely,

Max