This answer basically summarizes the entire hypothesis and purpose of the experiment. The independent variable is in this statement, somewhere, but it provides much too much information. It's as if someone asked you where you are going this weekend and you answered "I'm going to go south for 80 miles, east for a mile and a half, south for 3 miles, north for 3 miles, west for a mile and a half, and north for 80 miles." The answer is accurate but not informative.